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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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you sit there high and mighty king of your throne you wear the crown well always trying to do whats right telling me i'll go to hell how do you know this? have you no sin? you preach to me of all your good deeds then shun me when I try to attend those meetings are for hypocrites i'd rather not pretend so take one good long look in the mirror at yourself tell me how to be like you would I be happy then? tell me do the roses smell better over there? tell me why my life is worng and yours is right? tell me everything you know so i can sleep tonight i have been where you are and I gave up my seat I'd rather not play their games i'd rather not deciet.... so when we meet in heaven.. surprised look on your face the angels will look upon you with disgrace that is the day of judgement your right my day will come but so will yours my friend will you be ready then??? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Liked this much... and now comes the unsolicited advice...sometimes ya just gotta shake your head and smile...'cause they're not listening anyway... (smiles and hugs...) And believe me, you're doing just fine. WELCOME to the forum...(i am always late...) |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Julie Ann, I share a good deal of empathy with the emtions you have expressed here. By the way, welcome to Passions! Thanks for a nice piece of work. David2  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Julie a great poem. tell me do the roses smell better over there? tell me why my life is worng and yours is right? tell me everything you know so i can sleep tonight i have been where you are and I gave up my seat I'd rather not play their games i'd rather not deciet.... so when we meet in heaven.. surprised look on your face the angels will look upon you with disgrace that is the day of judgement your right my day will come but so will yours my friend will you be ready then??? Well that person will have their down fall and it will do doubt be on very hard ground. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "You do not destroy an idea by killing people; you replace it with a better one". Edward Keating ----- |
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