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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA 
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WALK WITH ME? Come walk with me along the path, For there is much for us to explore. We may see a dragon or two, and maybe hear them roar Do you believe in dragons? Well, I most certainly do. There really are such things you know, come I'll prove to you. Before we start, you have to let the realities flee your soul. Then and only then, may this fantasy take control. You'll see unicorns, and fairies, and polished armor clad Knights. The moon , the sun and all the stars will glow with brilliant lights. Your eyes will behold, mermaids tanning by the sea. If you believe, it's all there, for you and I to see. This fantasy will take you, where ever you choose to go, If You want to walk the enchanted path, I will make it so. You won't be disappointed, your fulfillment is guaranteed. You will return with a different view; take my hand and I will lead. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
WOW! i am impressed! you have painted a most wonderful picture with your flow of imagery. this was fantastically done. it's always nice to find a person who is willing to read between the lines of the world and see a little magick. again, very well done. you got my vote. We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I'd like a walk And we can talk Here's my hand Let's go to fantasy land I love the sun and all the stars Let's start this trip in a rocket car Travel through time A fantasy rhyme Alien worlds we can fly to In a rocket Chevy just me and you Alien planet with creatures that kiss Big sad eyes when leaving we'll miss Fly through comet tails With solar butterfly snails Get sucked into a black hole Heading for Earth is the next goal Solar winds pull us back As micro asteroids start to attack Mother comet calls them back As we fall to Earth through a time crack *Thanks for the fantasy ride Kitty** Loved your poem! You got my vote |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Hey Insect.. You got my vote too! And thanks for talking the walk with me. After reading your reply, I think I like your fantasy better!! ;-) If you can't make it so.. You need to let it go! |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Thank you Ethan_Halo!!! It ALWAYS gives me a big thrill to have someone respond to my attempts at poetry. It's people like you that makes it all worth while for me. If you can't make it so, you need to let it go! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Hey Kitty, so nice to see you back! I haven't seen you here in a while. What a picture this poem brought to mind. You have my vote! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Hellooooo Elizabeth.. Yep, it's been a while since I was here. Seem time has been running too short for me lately. Thanks for reading and writing. I see you are still here and booming!! And me, I keep reading and reading, what time I'm not in fantasy land, that is!! ;-) If you can't make it so, you need to let it go! |
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