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My Castle |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, 
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I wonder do you hate me, Because love doesnt feel like this, As you grasp my heart in your hands, And taunt me with a kiss. Do lies just come naturally, From the soul that I caress, Broken promises an action, To put my heart at test? Are painful words an attraction, To the ignorance I feel, To hold you now would mean to much, A world that's all surreal. Do you build up my trust, Just to watch it fall, Stranding me beyond believe, In this castle that you call....your love |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i know what you mean, great writing Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When all we seek is for someone to love from the heart... why does it seem that we get the ones who don't even love themselves. As sad as it is, it is so true. Liked it alot. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
amber, Powerful poetry and emotions you have penned here. It is an awful feeling when one toys with your emotions. Maybe you need a new castle to call home . . . Nice writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
This one shows too much of your soul beautiful sister of mine...  You KNOW this castle of yours just needs a good cleaning every now and then!!! LOL Glad to see you finding time to write again...Love you...Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always |
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