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Lady Web
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since 2000-04-12
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Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-07-09 02:49 PM


Like a missing piece from a puzzle, so are you from me
Each day I live on, with some, only of you I dream
I glance out my window in your direction
Wanting to call and make a connection
I know that you wouldn't mind
But I know that now isn't the right time
So many things I wish to share  
Only to you, certain things from my soul, I can bare
You may not know just the thought of you inspires me so
From my mind many of these words do flow
I'd like to know if your doing fine
If you need someone to talk to, keep me in mind
I know its not easy for you to open up
Cause your life is complicated enough
Your needs to help others is your given gift
Who is there, when your the one that needs a lift
Deep down I know that your alright
To say the least, having you as a friend is such a delight
Just knowing that your not to far away
Was enough to make my heart content for the rest of the day


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Marina
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1 posted 2000-07-09 02:59 PM


What a beautiful poem.  This reminds me of a good friend of mine.  Thank you for sharing this.

Marina
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Jamie
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2 posted 2000-07-09 03:02 PM


You express the emotions so well.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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3 posted 2000-07-09 04:10 PM


This is wonderful. . .

It is nice just to know that they're there. . . we know that they can hear us. . .

Excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
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MagnoliaBlue
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since 2000-05-12
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4 posted 2000-07-09 04:13 PM


Beautifully expressed.  

MagnoliaBlue


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Your Lady June~

Lady Web
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since 2000-04-12
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Houston, Texas
5 posted 2000-07-09 04:24 PM


Thanks for taking the time to read.
I haven't be here in awhile, its  nice to know that I'm still welcomed here amongst all the great poets.







Denise
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6 posted 2000-07-09 04:44 PM


Lovely sentiments!  

Denise

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