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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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faery tears < !signature-->the adventure has been so breathtaking... I too, have laid down the chase of reality and what “they” per sé is trustworthy longing so for the fantasy the faery magic of times past and am too on similar waves looking to find some one who really isn’t but some one too I can see through and touch and touches me not just the some one who is on the other side of this keyboard which appears so distant but near to making believe their not which is probably the truth O dream sigh... you are really one lucky girl if you truly have your fantasy laying beside you at night prayerfully one day that will truly be my innocence too..! I know that I can always count on and in your parlance when I need a little bit of quick cliche comfort for recognition you have no idea how much reality you've helped me through this nightmare why call a reality just your presence alone sets me reeling in a fantasy of frenzied love I haven't always known or replied to your dream but I have always read through my tears and I thank you... oh, I thank you as you can never hear my sleepless dark dreams fearing and yes I love you O so much my dearest sweet now rest awhile take the peaceful faery sleep. If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 07-09-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Lucky I am at lost for words, just wow and magical, beautifully written. oh, I thank you as you can never hear my sleepless dark dreams fearing and yes I love you O so much my dearest sweet now rest awhile take the peaceful faery "The stars will explode in the sky O but they don't, do they? Stars have their moment and then they die" Nick Cave |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ethereal and magically romantic and so lovely. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale--This poem has made my heart hurt for some reason that I can't quite pen, it is so lonely and longing and sweet and I understand it. |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
It made my heart smile!  Thanks Lucky, for more of your great writing! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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