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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-07-09 06:04 AM


faery tears

the adventure has been
so breathtaking... I too, have laid down the
chase of reality and what “they” per sé is trustworthy
longing so for the fantasy the faery magic of times past
and am too on similar waves looking to find some one
who really isn’t but some one too I can see through
and touch and touches me not just the some
one who is on the other side of this
keyboard which appears
so distant but near
to making believe
their not which is probably

the truth O dream sigh... you are really one
lucky girl if you truly have your fantasy laying beside
you at night prayerfully one day that will truly be my innocence

too..!  I know that I can always count on and in your parlance when
I need a little bit of quick cliche comfort for recognition you have no
idea how much reality you've helped me through this nightmare

why call a reality just your presence alone sets
me reeling in a fantasy of frenzied love I
haven't always known or replied
to your dream but I have
always read through
my tears and I thank
you... oh, I thank you as you
can never hear my sleepless dark
dreams fearing and yes I love you O
so much my dearest sweet now rest
awhile take the peaceful faery

sleep.

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If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name.  (Michelle A. Bartley)

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 07-09-2000).]

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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-07-09 06:07 AM


Lucky I am at lost for words, just wow and magical, beautifully written.

oh, I thank you as you
can never hear my sleepless dark
dreams fearing and yes I love you O
so much my dearest sweet now rest
awhile take the peaceful faery

"The stars will explode in the sky O but they don't, do they? Stars have their moment and then they die" Nick Cave


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-07-09 08:14 AM


Ethereal and magically romantic and so lovely. Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2000-07-09 04:00 PM


Dale--This poem has made my heart hurt for some reason that I can't quite pen, it is so lonely and longing and sweet and I understand it.
MagnoliaBlue
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 367

4 posted 2000-07-09 04:09 PM


It made my heart smile!  

Thanks Lucky, for more
of your great writing!

MagnoliaBlue


~My Skipper Jim
I love you!
Your Lady June~

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