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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-07-09 11:51 AM


      (just a quick one for the road)....


   She wakes up in the morning..
   gets her husband off to work..
   She cooks, she cleans, she never gets a dime..
   When her chores are finished..
   She puts herself online..
   There's someone in her e-mail..
   and he makes her feel so fine......

   It's just a little love e-ffair..
   Taking place in very thin e-air..
   No bodies touch, so they don't think it's wrong..
   They are free to come and free to go..
   They keep it cruisin' nice and slow..
   Their private e-mail e-ffair's goin' strong......

   She clicks there on his address..
   and she waits for him to load..
   She's wonderin' what her e-man's going to say..
   He makes her feel so beautiful..
   and they're travelin' down a road..
   that takes a new direction every day......

   It's just a little love e-ffair..
   Takin' place in very thin e-air..
   Imagination fuels the heart, I'm told..
   They e-mail back and forth a lot..
   Both hoping that they won't get caught..
   And left with just a monitor to hold!!!

          


Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~

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MagnoliaBlue
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 367

1 posted 2000-07-09 12:22 PM


Very well done.  I like the idea here.
(Happens a lot ,I guess)

This is so cute and you really did a
wonderful job of showing this side of
cyber-land.
Keep writing


MagnoliaBlue


~My Skipper Jim
I love you!
Your Lady June~

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-07-09 12:45 PM


Very nice sunny1
I have heard of a few folks who made lives together after  falling in "e-love".

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2000-07-09 01:09 PM


The title caught my eye...the thoughts caught at my heart...who better than we to know the power of the written word? E-ffairs can be just as real as the real thing.

[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-09-2000).]

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