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Open Poetry #8

She's gone

dreamy_eyes
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 67

0 posted 2000-07-09 07:31 AM

Things for us weren't going to well,
I tried to catch her but she fell,
I thought that she was happy and fine,
I wanted to hold her until she was mine,
the world I wanted to protect her from,
I loved her so much and now she's gone,
their are so many things which I don't understand,
like the content of the suicuide note clenched tightly in her hand,
she explained how she thought she had made my life hell,
my feelings for her I never did tell,
I loved her so much and she loved me,
that's the way friendship should be,
when I was with her I felt so alive,
I would die so she could survive,
I like to believe that she is with me always,
for as long as I live she will be with me for the rest of my days.

by Deb
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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-07-09 08:16 AM

Oh........I feel your pain here...........
It is written with your heart and it touches mine......

"I would die so she could survive"

You've captured the essence of friendship...
(good work here.....)

Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 2000-07-09 10:47 AM

Deb, this is a heartfelt way to remember your friend. I'm sorry that this happened. Very good work.

Elizabeth

I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!

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