Open Poetry #8 |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
In silent nature calls me To dreams I need. Visions of whom I once meant to you. You dream of all good beyound And hope for best Though you fight your own knowledge That your heart invests. In silence I am complete The need of me The show of life I cannot forge So death becomes my sword. The dance of the trees that laugh Make dizzy my fate Embrace the coolness of this place Once forgiven splendor is made. And one last breath in vegence Made cruel by my hope Of heavens lost and none other Than hopes last kiss for love. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In silence I am complete The need of me The show of life I cannot forge So death becomes my sword. The dance of the trees that laugh Make dizzy my fate Embrace the coolness of this place Once forgiven splendor is made. And one last breath in vegence Made cruel by my hope Of heavens lost and none other Than hopes last kiss for love. ---------------- beautiful sad poem memories and traces of love left behind and lost well written and expressed emotions, i really like the way you write. jm |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful and heart-wrenching poem. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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