Open Poetry #8 |
To Remember |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
To Remember Come join me for a while, on the swing next to me, cicadas are singing, honeysuckle’s sweet beneath the blue oak tree. The moon is almost full, delta breezes soft tonight, the kids finally sleeping, nowhere you have to be so dim the porch light. Star gazing, but not in the sky, it’s your eyes that glitter so, velvet touches mirror night, casting a midnight spell by the waxy glow. This is what I’ll remember when time steals life away, if left behind in waiting, these snapshots I shall carry until our reunion day. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Snapshots kept in that special memory book -Where else ... but your loving heart ? Love it, I really do. You just got a way about you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Corinne, from one swinger to another....I love it |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is beautiful Corinne--so loving and tender and sad. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
thank you, Marge, Balladeer and Martie! Trying to get back into my more normal style... Corinne |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
A Lovely poem....enjoyed it greatly Blessed Be, Beth |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I absolutely love the vision of your heart. Your poems are among my favorites in which to escape and travel in. Loved this. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect C, wonderful writing...as always lovely imagery sweetly laced with your emotions take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Star gazing, but not in the sky, it’s your eyes that glitter so, velvet touches mirror night, casting a midnight spell by the waxy glow. .... Corinne, Shall I simply say LOVELY and get away with it... I hope I do... regards, sudhir |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful, Corinne! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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