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Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-07 04:39 PM





To have you is a must
I have thought of us
It's pure lust.

I have visions of you at night
Daydream during the day
I know I want you
no matter what you say.

I dreamt of your body close to mine
This dream of mine is so sublime.

I have to have at least one touch
You cant deny it
I want it so much.

Please dont think of saying no
Or without an explanation ask me
to go.

You cant just act like a tease
And only give out
Whenever you please.

I know what i need
Dont ever think
Think of asking me to plead.



© Copyright 2000 Cherie - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2000-07-08 05:04 PM


Beth,
     this is full of Passion and Desire. . . who could resist??

Powerful. . . well done. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-07-09 03:13 AM


wonderful read..... I can't see a "NO" coming after this beautiful plea.  
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-07-09 09:06 AM


Aah.......Beth......

       It's already been said....but, really,
  who could possibly say no to this???

         I like the way you captured the
             need of desire.....
    like the elusive butterfly in the net...

          (Very Nice, indeed!!!!!)


Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~

Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
4 posted 2000-07-14 01:21 AM


I hope if you dont have the one you desire then another one can quickly come along.. However, even if the one you desire desires you back, make sure its not just lust all the way if you get "into" a relationship..

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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