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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Have you ever been afraid of what life Is like, to be sought after To be made. Have you ever felt your heart Stop a beat As you are torn apart. Have you ever lost your soul To have it shreaded As you lose control. Do you remember loves first sting That gracious moment We all want to believe. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yes, I have. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Have you ever felt your heart Stop a beat As you are torn apart. Have you ever lost your soul To have it shreaded As you lose control. -------------------- know these feelings well, I call it "feeling like I've been kicked in the chest" ... but it seems the pain is worth it... worth believing in I only need a little distance to fall ... another touching piece Michael... thank you for the e-mail ... i had trouble replying to that addy... so i resent to your above addy at hotmail. later kind poet, jan What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was nice and Yes I have too. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Yes! loved this  Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderfully written poem, enjoyed reading this. "The stars will explode in the sky O but they don't, do they? Stars have their moment and then they die" Nick Cave |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yep, I have.......... I think we all have!! (Great writing.....great read...) |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Oh yes... Experienced all but the past lines in the 2 weeks since I got in a car wreck. Guess you call it the MACK truck syndrome... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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