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Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-07 04:06 PM




Hey pout, pour me another drink
as we sit here with stale smoke smiles
pressures of the week gone by
hardly left echoes in our laughing styles

tears free flowing like oceans rolling
rememberence of our past, our lies
crying, laughing, belching loudly
bourbon and coke our best allies

rambling on how days are so long
and how nights too short to sleep
morning breaks...we drank too much
"won't do that again"..a promise we wont keep

The day shines bright on those friends of night
who shared their souls for free
with love and honor....and an empty bottle
bourbon, coke, poutprincess,and me.


*this poem proudly sponsered by poutprincess and beth...a best friends production*  )


© Copyright 2000 Cherie - All Rights Reserved
Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-08 12:49 PM




I hope everyone enjoys reading this as we had heaps of fun writting it....a good laugh once in awhile can certainly lift the spirits of all...

Blessed Be,
Beth And PoutPrincess

MysticalNights
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since 2000-05-17
Posts 112
Oklahoma
2 posted 2000-07-08 01:18 AM


Best Friends Productions...  I really enjoyed this read.  I have made the "won't do that again" promise also.  Broke it way too many times.  Great work!

A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes...

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-07-08 08:37 AM


Hi Beth......

         Sometimes it's necessary to overindulge just to get the creative juices flowing, so to speak! Nice to have a friend to share it with, eh?
     I enjoyed your humor, and you painted a
picture that we all can fit into.......

           Keep it up, for readers like me,

                      Blessed Be,

                         Sunny


The arts wash away from the soul...the dust of
everyday life-----Picasso

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-07-09 09:00 AM


and me too...LOL...don't forget me!

I liked this alot...thanks...

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