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TravisK New Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 8England |
Ensnared by the thorn of a May ambush ,scornful river rats malevolently draw umbrellas, while carefree magpie tastes sky salt mustering along a wafer thin watch tower.Stealing her flight of devotion , innocent of the melee below : oblivious to the serpentine road painting a shallow stream ; pieces of debris floating , gallant rafts scaling the neighbourhood. Travis Kennedy ( 2000 ). |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i love this i don't knoe what it is, but the words just stream a seam of imagry right threw my brain. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
You have an ethereal style, mystical and colorful. I really enjoyed this work, it was a refreshing read!! I do hope there's more brewing in there somewhere.......... Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~ |
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