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You make my heart beat
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You make my heart beat |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia 
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I laid in bed last night And thought of you I turned off the light And knew it was true. It wasnt in a dream And it wasnt a lie It was real life I could almost die. I thought I'd gone to heaven God had come for me But in the end I just had to open Open my eyes and see. You really are real I can open my heart I can really feel And make a new start. Thankyou Scott for opening me I know we are going to last You and me. You will never know how much i care, I have all the love in the world to share. And try to remember this my sweet, You are the one who makes me heart beat. ~I wrote this poem for someone who I thought I cared for but in the end I didnt even know him~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem here, Beth!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Beth...... I think it's a beautiful work. You did love him when you put your feelings into those words, and if the truth be told: No one ever REALLY knows anyone else deep down. That's the exciting part of life.... to discover something new every day! Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~ |
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