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Out of the Blue
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Out of the Blue |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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out of the blue I saw you watching me you heard me talking watched me walking saw me cry heard my sigh out of the blue you saw me catch your eye quickly i look away out of the blue you came to me in your eyes desire i see out of the blue you showed me how to love you loved her so you told me know you must let go out of the blue you held me close time stood still out of the blue you captured my heart stealing into the night out of the blue you left out of sight not out of mind out of the blue I beg you please be kind return my heart my peace of mind.... Julie :) |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Great work, Julie. I liked the last two lines. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very nice indeed ... brought a tear to my cheek! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
Every time i read another of your poems I find more that i enjoy...you truly have a talent and use it perfectly... Blessed Be, Beth |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Elizabeth~~~~Thank you for your kind reply...  CocoBaci~~~~~Didn't mean to make you cry...sory  glad you enjoyed thanks for replying....Beth~~~~ You are too kind.....you also have a gift....I haven't read all of yours as of yet but I will.....Thank you for your kind words!! Julie :) |
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