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The Beginning, Chapter I [Inspired by Sven]
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Sunshine
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The Beginning, Chapter I [Inspired by Sven] It was there, on another plane in another life in someone else’s dream somewhere amid star shine and moon’s beam loved a life anew loved another, too there, on the other plane Memories trickle in between night dream and reality where there lies the line black/white, lust/love so close, so far there, on another plane lived another life anew loved others too there, on that other plane Seafoam memories red-orange china memories fling me far away to sea there, on the other plane Perhaps an ancient bird was I as in dream state I often fly, under power of my own there, on the other plane Is it just a wanton dream, of people/beings I only want to be or is it something I should see there, on the other plane… 27 June 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Kit McCallum
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Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Sunshine ... such a mystical and magical feel transcending to other worldly planes ... ENCORE!!! (I'll watch for Chapter 2 ... loved this) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful and mystical indeed. I will anxiously be waiting to read the other chapters. Wonderful read to enter into the afternoon with. |
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Sunshine
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Kit, Mark, you two are quick! Chapter II is posted... and thanks! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
 On to #II I go! Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I've been enjoying this thread in Feelings muchly. Great poem girl! Now on to the others for me too... (this poem gave me shivers btw...maybe it's too close to home??) ~H |
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Sunshine
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JP, enjoy... XA - perhaps the shivers are because...you are...my twin?... |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Sunshine - This is incredible, can't wait to read the next two.....Bonnie |
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Sunshine
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Bonnie, thanks...enjoy... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Perhaps an ancient bird was I as in dream state I often fly, under power of my own there, on the other plane Is it just a wanton dream, of people/beings I only want to be or is it something I should see there, on the other plane… what adream, on to read the rest, oh I can't wait to see where this magical trip will take me. "Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison |
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Sunshine
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Brian, I sincerely hope you will enjoy... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superb Sunny!! A wonderful work. . . to see that you have traveled far to get where you are now is something that doesn't come to most people easily. . . To travel to those other planes of existance. . . do we know that they exist? We don't, for sure, but what if they do?? And now, on to Part II!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Sven, I owe this to you...thank you for the inspiration and for pulling out what has always laid silent... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, This written sunshine warms me all over. *L* |
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Sunshine
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SY, thank you SO much...knowing you are reading this brightens my day... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ In touch with yourself .... 'Perhaps an ancient bird was I as in dream state I often fly, under power of my own there, on the other plane' Love the flow of your recall. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Thank you Marge, hope you enjoy II and III as well... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
It was there, on another plane in another life in someone else’s dream somewhere amid star shine and moon’s beam .. .. .. Perhaps an ancient bird was I as in dream state I often fly, under power of my own there, on the other plane ........... Karilea, A day or two away and here you are with a book full of poems.... I am inspired to read them all, and guess this is the first I started with, and a wonderful choice too... Kudos to me... ha ha  Many More Kudos to you for writing such an extraordinary work.... WOW regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Sudhir, my friend, I hoped you would come in...welcome home...I hope the trilogy meets with your standards... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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