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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Liars Haiku Frosty lies to sell coldly woven in half-truths- bought with love for you Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Very well said! This is more of a senryu though. I loved this!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is almost spooky! Excellent! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Jamie.....bought with love for you...what a price to pay. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Purveyor of honey- Thank You and--- I suppose it could be taken as either one. It does however make reference to seasons of the year ( frosty- coldly)- however I see your humanistic point. SEA- Thanks, the cost of lying is often overlooked I think. jamie< !signature--> Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". [This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well I dont know Senryu from Haiku from Achoo... but i know I like this  cool impact of last line great work jamie jm |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ A chilling frostbite to settle on beating heart killing love's first pangs You do have a talent for this format. I enjoy reading them. *LOL @ JanetMarie* Got her sneezing ! *Melissa - of course it could be a Senryu in liar's disguise ! Thusly - 'Liar's Haiku' Ah-ha ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
Call it what you like! I love it. |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
Chilling like the iced glass.. fragile and frosty like freezing fahrenheit ... hugss <**> |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Thanks for the praise. and good addition marge! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oooh I love this, chilling indeed Excellent Jamie Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
another one to delight my eyes I do hope these are WHITE lies...LOL keep posting |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Maree- Thanks so much, you are as usual most kind. Kaile - lol..I suppose it is somewhat of a paradox that frosty lies cannot be white lies. Thanks for the support. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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