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When can I have back my heart?
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When can I have back my heart? |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia 
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When I asked you to choose Late that night, I didn't think I'd loose It was such a fright. I thought you'd stay with me And let go of the fears, Finally see And notice my tears. Why did you ever go? when you are all I need, I wanted love to show, And our feelings to grow. You could never say it wasnt true, We belonged You said it too. I want to ask you this When can i have back my heart? After all Your the one who made the part. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i'm sorry for your sad moments, though, your sweet poem came out of it, i know it might not seem like alot, but these are very delicatly put words and they are very sweet. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Been there. I feel for you, Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Realistic poem  Most of us will identify im sorry for your loss and do hope that time will heal your wounds |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Beth: I feel your pain in this poem and I can relate with the choosing part. It's so hard when you ask someone to choose because the risk is that your heart will break depending on their choice. I'm so sorry that your heart broke with that choice. I hope it mends soon. kat |
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