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i'm not away, i'm with my dogs
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i'm not away, i'm with my dogs |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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I have two big dogs who listen when I say, I'm not away. Does the limb hold you? Do you bare the leaves their ease when the wind is still? As if you where heavens hand tied to the mists. A simple smile will burn the lips, as waters breath turns to crisp, and holds the milky blue. I have tangled time of new in the rusty arms of truth. Snaked you threw a withered trail and slithered home in silence. < !signature--> Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids [This message has been edited by redheart angrybraids (edited 07-05-2000).] |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
This poem is awsome! I like it alot! |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank you so much! Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I agree, awesome it is. I have put you in my personal library thingy. Thanks for posting. *Peace. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
this is really deep, Red - nicely put together, flowing where there is no flow expected, rushing where a pause is sought - beautiful, unpredictable - is it like its author? Your words are your soul - I think that's an answer. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Totally awesome. My favorite part: Snaked you threw a withered trail and slithered home in silence. Loved it. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
spit fire- i love your name, thanks for checking this out and putting it in your library, that really hits home, thank you dearly. LngJhnAg- thank you for the realation explaination, i really dig it when people get in to it, about the writing, i'm just a plain old nut, who loves to write the nonsense images that travel through my mind, and resonate in my heart, thank you for reading, i enjoyed reading your comment. Mark-thank you for your dignifying words, i really appreciated them. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Redheart,your refreshing poetry never ceases to amaze me...as always, i feel i cannot do justice to the profound sentiments that must be lying behind this piece but i can say:i enjoyed this read and thank you  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
your writing is pure subconscious symbolism--another dream by redheart...(and thank you for missing me abit...e ya soon lady) |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
kaile-thank you for always saying something so good to me, i'm so thankful to hear your comments, serenity-i have been trying for so long to sum up my writing into an explicit few words that you have finally answered, thank you so much, know when someone asks me what i write about, i can simply say, subconcsiuos symbolism, and thank you, because you are my best friend on this sight(just being cheesy) and i'm so thankful that i have some one to talk in poetry code with, you are wonderful. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Angry, Got to tell you this one is really really nice. And oh..! By te way... Thanks too for getting my wife and 18 year old daughter hooked on that "poetry in motion" thing... really I mean it... their so busy I can get some real writing done. love and prayers. (lucky) Dale If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
lucky-hahe, i know what their going threw i used to be hoocked on it to, don't worry they'll get tired of it after a few weeks or so, say hi to em fot me though, ha ha, thank you for your comment on my poem, i'll have to go check out your stuff, thank you again. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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