Open Poetry #8 |
A Perfect Cuddle |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Two loving arms that hold me tight against the coming of the night A tender hand to brush away the cares and worries of the day A honeyed voice that calls my name over and over, but never the same A strawberry kiss from my loves own lips what can be any better than this? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Well ..... maybe a little whipped cream ! Love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
ROFL@Marge There is nothing more perfect than this Paula...at least none that I can think of and no place I would rather be. Beautifully written~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge....LMAO...well heres some whipped cream just for you girl... Butterflies...its easy to play when you are in love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading about A Perfect Cuddle. You are a lucky girl...James |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
really beautiful Paula, loved this. very sweet and sweeter than whipped cream though Marge what about chocolate, that is much better than whipped cream. The Irish kind anyway, you haven't lived till you have tried cadburys chocolate. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
It would be better if the parties were different...rofl.. Seriously, Very nice. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...yes I am lucky...the luckiest lady in ther world Brian...thanks...and chocolate sounds great, although I am partial to M&M's Jamie...seriously thank you |
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