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Every Giver Needs A Taker
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Every Giver Needs A Taker |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Every Giver Needs A Taker ~*Marge Tindal*~ Let me love you tenderly beneath the pale moonlight Hold you until the dawn breaks after a loving night Let me listen to you as the story of your life unfolds Sharing all your dreams helping you realize your goals Let me be your partner in front of the crowd Cheering you to victory standing oh, so proud Let me rub your shoulders at the end of a weary day Feed you your favorite meal Kneel with you to pray Every giver needs a taker This is who I choose to be Giving you my love knowing you treat it tenderly ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, you give a beautiful gift when you give your love...Lovely poem! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ The receiver of this precious gift will have riches beyond compare my friend. Wonderful writing!! I think you've said it all.  Lone Wolf Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Marge* This is beautifully said...I love the idea and the weave was as graceful as ever...it's not so bad to be the giver when you put it this way! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Being a giver just comes so easily. Thank you, my friend. LoneWolf~ Thanks, hon. I'm sure you noticed that giver and taker have no gender restrictions. It's whatever fits best. I like to think the 'gift' is in the giving. You're a sweetie. ButterfliesDC~ Being a giver has rewards that are far beyond measure. Being a taker has pleasures likewise. Thank you for your thoughtful comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Every giver needs a taker That's the only way to go Every bisquit needs a baker Or it's only so much dough. Every oat must have a Quaker Or a breakfast is so-so Every salt needs its own shaker If it wants to have the flow. Every lawn must have a raker Or it doesn't look too well Every sleeper needs a waker Or he'll never hear the bell. Every human needs a Maker He can pray to every nigh Every giver needs a taker Marge, you said it all just right! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful sentiments. I agree completely, that is how true love should be. What a giver of perfect poetry you are, which I am proud to say that I am a willing taker, I admire you Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Each poem needs a read and you sure fill the need ! Every nut needs a shell and you wear yours so well ! *Now ... about that 'raker' position - send resume quickly ! Oh, and I'd like the grass a little lower if you could bring your mower !  Melissa~ What a genuinely sweet, sweet reply. *Hugs* from my heart to yours. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Marge, I'll gladly take a poem like this! In turn, I'll be the giver when I post my next poem (whenever that will be!). Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved your thoughts in this Marge! Indeed, the givers are able to keep giving when their gifts are so sweetly revered ... beautifully penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful poem...yes every given needs a taker and I'm giving my love to Lena and I will find out soon enough if she will be the taker...of course I want her to give her love to me and I will take it...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Can't get a better gift than that. Beautifuuly written. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Isn't this give and take just a wonderful thing ? Kit~ You captured it exactly. Thank you for enjoying it as I enjoy your comments. James~ Thank you for the sweet reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Whoops ! Cyber replies crossing in the morning. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Your words are pure truth, Marge....I can't imagine having no one to take what I give. ______________________________ If ya live to give, If no one taketh you are forsaketh. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You said it, as ever, with style. Lovely poem, Marge!! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Every giver needs a taker This is who I choose to be Giving you my love knowing you treat it tenderly Marge, very beautiful. loved this one. "Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Marge you are beautiful and so is your poem Loved it!Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge..... You're so right....there cannot be giving without taking, and we all choose which to be, I think. I loved your work, and the feelings of mutual sharing spoke to me.........looking forward to more....... The arts wash away from the soul...the dust of everyday life-----Picasso |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge, I loved your poem, and you and Balladeer the dueling poets of the morning added some spark to my day. Thank you so much. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ I live to give and find myself richer in the offering. You, my friend, give to my heart and I am taken with your friendship. BrianM~ Thanks, my friend. DarkAngel~ It is a grand compliment - my heart is hugged. Sunny1~ I appreciate your thoughts, new friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Little Gemini~ You sneaked right in on me. Glad you enjoyed this little offering. I hope mine and Balladeer's quips give many smiles for many a morning. He is a jewel and I appreciate him so. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You have to give love before it comes back to you...even if you start out giving these few words...love started for me with a reply to a post...amazing isnt it? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Amazing indeed - and thank you for relating to this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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