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Do we have to let go?
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Do we have to let go? |
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Lorina New Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 1 |
Things went wrong I know But the momories of the past Do we have to let go Am I the only one Who feels like this? Or do you, too Miss my kiss Do you think of me When you sleep at night About how we lost everything In just one silly fight Are you feeling blue Because your heart hurts Now you've changed This I can see Cuz the one who lies with you Is not me Everytime I see you It's like you've lost that twinkle in your eyes It makes me feel bad And I try hard not to let you see me cry Even though we're not together And forever didn't last This promise I will keep I will never regret, forget, or deny Our memories from the past |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you've expressed a universal emotion that it is so hard to let go. I would like to see more of your writing. Kathleen |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very nice poem Lorina. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lorina~ Welcome to the greatest family on the web. Enjoy your stay with us ... we will enjoy having you here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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