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jennie may*
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since 2000-06-17
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0 posted 2000-07-06 08:12 PM

I'll try to forget you
like
one forgets
phone numbers

tip of the
tounge
phenomenon

I will train myself to
not remember
your face again until

hopefully you will be
only a speck of
dust

swept up
and
shoved into a
pile

in the corner of my room
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-07-06 08:20 PM

and then the cat comes in and scatters the dustballs...

very good, jennie!  I like.  If I may, change 'tounge' to 'tongue' and it will be perfect.

Hugs,

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ
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