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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Essence Your fragrance reigns my brain. Commanding it with ease. Like scented flowers coaxing bees. I taste you on the mornings dew. Heed you on the winds abide And feel your essence deep inside. Inciting all my day's and nights Stirring love within my dream. Causing ripples in my stream. And from this lovely diadem. Glows a single candles light. That lights the shadows of my night. And should it change beyond this view, I would you hold my hand there too. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A lovely wonderful work....Seymour... regards, sudhir |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sy - This is really great - I love the style - and the last two lines bring it to a close so well, everything summarized cleanly, unequivocably. Great poem. Back to the top, where it belongs. Mike |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Pure and prolific poetic ponderings, dear Seymour...a lovely display of devoted preoccupation. < !signature--> Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
excellent poem more than worthy of the book should you so desire to start it in the running  Rex |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'And should it change beyond this view, I would you hold my hand there too.' Just the tenderest thought ... and that's perfection ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
I really like this piece of work. It's sweet and tender. This is wonderfully romantic and very precious. GREAT WORK! love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, This is perfect, just perfect Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Big thanks. LngJhnAg, Them are nice words buddy. Meadow, You are a dear. Rex, I'll think about it. Marge, I love you too. Holly, Thank you so much. Elizabeth, And so are you, Love Sy |
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