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JP
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Loomis, CA

0 posted 2000-07-06 02:12 PM


The glory of the world,
washes over my well-worn body.
The magnificence of creation,
the total harmony of nature,
the absolute certainty provided,
by the knowledge of life's continuance,
rages through my soul.

The brilliance of love,
flashes in my sorrow filled mind.
The gentleness of sweet lovemaking,
the urgency felt in passion's thrust,
the sweet release in climactic lust,
dream states induced afterglow,
ease through my heart.

The glory of the world,
touches magic upon my dying flame.
Flashes of sunlight in the morn,
flickers of flame in campfire night,
tendrils of melody in child's song,
essence of harmony in lover's laugh,
bathe my dirty, well-used mind.

The beauty of this world,
comes to me in many ways.
Fathomless, unrelenting ways,
only to look, to feel, to see,
only to open myself, to be me,
only to allow you, a love to be,
to touch me and make me whole.



Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-07-06 02:15 PM


quote:
Flashes of sunlight in the morn,


flashing through to thank you for this piece...it likes me...



Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Meadowmuse
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2 posted 2000-07-06 04:32 PM


I enjoyed the open, fluid, flow of this poem and its reflective aire. Quite lovely.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-07-07 05:43 AM


JP, this so tenderly beautiful...exquisitely gentle in emotion...I like very much.
Beth
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4 posted 2000-07-07 06:08 AM



A superbly written poem...
I enjoyed it throughly

Blessed Be,
Beth

JP
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Loomis, CA
5 posted 2000-07-07 10:17 AM


Thank you for the kind words ladies  



Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway

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