Friendship Is An Open Door

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Open Poetry #8

Friendship Is An Open Door

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

0 posted 2000-07-06 12:27 PM

Friendship is known as many things
From commitment to concern
To sharing our deep secrets
Withou the fear of spurn.

It's fellowship and honesty
A lending, helping hand
To give without expecting
To correct not reprimand.

It's a heaert full of compassion
That seeks out only good
That would take away all painful scars
If it only could.

Friendship is an open door
To many pleasant things
It lifts the spirit, stirs the soul
Always prospering.

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 2000-07-07 10:36 AM

First I must say this nails it! This is friendship!

Second some pointer outters here:
4th line, 1st stanza, "Withou the fear of spurn." s/be (Without)

1st line, 3rd stanza: "It's a heaert full of compassion" I think you meant "heaert" to be (heart)

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