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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio 
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"Dead Soul" Losing touch with reality, going quite insane. No more strict morality, running thru my brain. Rejected,ignored,tormented, all of these i hate sorry soul demented no room to communicate Hanging on a limb, careful not to fall the light is so dim am i worth it all? Disgusted yet amused, inside this frightened head, the light has now diffused my escape is to be dead. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
yah ... that would do it or you could wait to see what wind-bourn seed could settle in with patience and the right amount of fertilizer even a dead soul can grow to be the envy of any gardener Your poem is very nicely done  Rex |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
this is pretty grim, lil Blondie - Perhaps letting go of all those other things would be a better path? If you can touch others with your writing, why not reflect for aminute that you do have worth... Here I go again, transferring the poem onto the author - just call me "Long John in Deep Waters" - lol |
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Cutie Putootie Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 54Ohio |
Blondie, oh Blondie, what am I going to do with you? Hun, I heard about your aunt passing away and I heard on the news about your mother's car accident but don't worry hun, things will get better! Keep that chin up, I'm sure your mom will recover and I pray for you and your family everyday. Love, Kim |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
 Thanks Kim...rough time here.[This message has been edited by Blondie (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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Katrina Katrina New Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5 |
This is a very sad poem Blondie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looks like you have lots of stress coming your way right now...I found the best way to deal with it is to face up to the truth. If we avoid it the fear and anxiety take over in our minds. If we deal with what is happening right now in this moment we find that we do have the strength to make it thru...and we go on because we have to...we don't want to stay in a place of hurt or unhappiness for to long or it will torment us...Take care...James |
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