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Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-06 12:01 PM

You can't replace what's already lost,
It's learning and pain,
It has no cost.

There's really no point in looking back,
It all hurts,
To see what we all lack.

Don't think of all your pain,
Think memories,
The knowledge you gain.

Try to keep you head up high,
And remember,
There's no point in the tears you cry.

It all makes you strong,
Even if sometimes,
You don't know where you belong.

There's always going to be hurt like this,
Think of new relationships,
That first special kiss.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-07-06 12:48 PM

Absolutely the way to go. Wonderfully put and a message to take to heart. Loved it.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 2000-07-06 01:41 PM

Yep, words of wisdom here. Only thing the past serves is to teach us lessons (hopefully) and to leave us with some good memories, otherwise, march on, march on.

Corinne

michelax
Junior Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 16
Malta

3 posted 2000-07-10 05:35 PM

Ahhh, I sigh, and ponder, how can you say so much, with so little. Great, and thanks for sharing.

- Michelax

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-07-10 08:39 PM

Beth,

Move onward and hold your head high. There is one out there for you.

Nice writing!!

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

5 posted 2000-07-11 07:15 AM

~Thankyou to everyone for all the sweet replies..I appreciate them greatly~

Blessed Be,
Beth

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

6 posted 2000-07-11 07:41 AM

The mists of time .

The past,
At last,
It fades into mist,
Helps me forget,
Just why I exist,
When I forget,
What has happened before,
I hear this load knocking,
Upon the thick door,
Like salesman apear,
New sufering and fear,
They stick in my mind,
Like the saddness I hide,
This trouble,
I fear,
No difference than then,
Back in the distance,
The memories back when ....

I really enjoyed the poem - so much so that I wrote what the same feeling would be like from a negative view point as this is the way my brain works as I am a manic pesamist .
I am going to post this poem up as a new topic some time .
I loved it .
L.of.L. Tom .

Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

7 posted 2000-07-12 02:28 PM

~Thanks alot for your great reply...I loved the poem "the mists of time"....I am quite a negative person and this suits me..lol...Anyway thanks for you reply...I appreciated it~

Blessed Be,
beth

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

8 posted 2000-07-12 04:46 PM

Beth.....

       I love the way you write!!!!!!!!!!!

       You have a positive approach to
       things that are felt every day....

       I'm a fan........

                             (Blessed Be)

Life is but a dream...
so sleep easy...

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