Open Poetry #8 |
Stars |
OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
This is an experiment in trying to marry music with verse, I dont know wether it works, but if you take the first letter of every word you can play "Twinkle, twinkle little star". Stars Glittering, ghostly diamonds dance, Engulfing every dream, Crystaline cut beauty, By astral angels gleam, Dappled darkling cresents, Caught by brilliance abound, Distant dim coronas cluster, Binding black around, Galactic gems defiant, Daze each ebony divide, China cusp beclouded, By albeados algid glide. Olias |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Olias~ What a clever little piece. It not only 'works' ... It ROCKS ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Thanks Marge, I think it was good for me to use the discipline of only allowing myself seven letters because there is no "F" in the song in this key. I'm enjoying setting myself these little problems it helps me grow. Regards Olias |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
I like this! It's a great little experiment!! Great job! love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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