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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
I've seen our spirits fly, though not a lovers' dance < !signature-->I've seen us flying high, and yes, we take that chance To listen with our hearts, erasing as we grow The lines that stand between us, walking on tiptoe Not wanting to foul out, I take two big steps back I love you as I do, between good-bye attacks I dream of new tomorrow's, one day at a time When I can clearly see without the use of lines No lines to restrict me, to journey as I please No lines to confine you, heart and soul at ease No boundaries, no borders between you and I No fear, no regrets, friendly spirits in the sky Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... [This message has been edited by HM3 (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Geez, is it that bad?  Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well done here Hm3! You've shown love and sorrow all in one shot. And often it's hard to meld together two concepts like that. As far as being "bad," you have to understand, LOL, sometimes here in the open forum things sink quickly! It doesn't reflect on the poem or the poet themselves, just on the overwhelming nature of so many people in one place! Things like this happen! I've seen it happen more than once to even the established poets we have here!!! Take care! And we'll bump this back up where it belongs! Christopher |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Welcome to passions...I know it is not your first post...i'll have to search for it....wonderful feelings you have penned here. enjoyed it much!!  Julie :) |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*good-bye attacks* SIGH yes I know... I liked this muchly HM3!  ~Heather |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
No lines to restrict me, to journey as I please No lines to confine you, heart and soul at ease No boundaries, no borders between you and I No fear, no regrets, friendly spirits in the sky I hope that day will come for you. really enjoyed the poem. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
HM3 - I came to this thread, as you asked - and found a simply lovely piece of work... I like it, my friend - I like it...  |
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