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I Am / You Are |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I Am/You Are I am the yin to your yang... the breath in your bubble... You are the because to my why... the reflection in my eyes... I am the curled fingers in your hand... You are the beat in my heart... You are the ring in my bell... the light in my eyes... I am the dreams in your slumber... the beacon on your shore... You are the dare in my dreams... the lilt in my voice... I am the warmth in your arms... the reason behind your shy smile... You are why I know there is a God... and the reason for angels... the source of my pride... the swell in my heart... I am the horizon to your journey... your partner in life's dance... summer rain to your parched lips... You are the beam in my moon... I do not want to be, without You You want I, to make two to be one ~~~~~ I am the yin to your yang... You are the because to my why... ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 26 June 2000 Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ 'You are the because to my why...' Just gotta love it !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, these are incredibly beautiful words and thoughts. You have outdone yourself with this one. It is magnificent and I mean it |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh Sunshine! This is one of those when a poet has to say "Darn it. Why didn't I think of that!" It's Truly a beautiful piece. "You are the dare in my dreams I love it. Simply love it! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, You are... very talented my friend!! Nice writing. LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, you are...the reason I work so hard!... 'Deer, you are...one of the best poets I've seen, and the poet I strive to please... Tennesse and Lone Wolf...you are...the folks that make me smile... thank you all... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You are the sun the source of energy the origin of light I am a moon basking in glory by reflecting your light ...... Great work, Karilea, Great work indeed!!! regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a lovely compliment, Sudhir...thank you so very much... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You are the beat in my heart... Truer words never spoken. A masterpiece and one to treasure. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Mark, thank you m'friend... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Karilea (by the way, I love your name) This is beautiful. I loved it, it was a breath of fresh air to read. And you are the poet who adds "sunshine" to our hearts with your poetry! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melissa, I read about your "name" too, and henceforth may begin calling you "Mel"... thank you for your lovely comments. Sometimes I am not so "sunny" but I try hard, anyway. So glad you enjoyed the poem. Karilea |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, wonderful poem. really wonderful. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Shouldn't we have a crying smiley face for poems like this? Not the sad face, but one that shows you crying because the poem is just so beautiful and touching...  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
brian, thank you, really, thanks... JP, I agree! and I am touched by your comments, thank you... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
WOW Sunshine - This is just sooooo lovely, every single line. Bonnie |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bonnie, how kind of you to come in and read...thank you... |
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