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When Love Finds You Co-Written with Jeffrey Carter
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When Love Finds You Co-Written with Jeffrey Carter |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
It can happen out of the blue Without reason or rhyme When you least expect it to It can happen any time It may be in the spring or fall Morning or dead of night Some day you will hear the call And finally see the light So where will you be When love finds you When it lands on your heart From out of the blue No chance to run From feelings so true So what will you do When love finds you Will you rejoice in its splendor Or recoil from its touch Let it make your heart tender Or will it be too much You've been hiding in the dark And lonliness of night But when you feel that spark Can't stop the breakthrough of light So where will you be When love finds you When it lands on your heart From out of the blue No chance to run From feelings so true So what will you do When love finds you Thank you very much to Jeffrey for honoring me with his writing once again!!!! It has been fun as always my friend. We make a great team!!  Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Is this a rhetorical question? Great teamwork- enjoyed it. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ok, the two of you are making the rest of us look bad!! LOL Excellent poem. . . good work!! --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
another jewel from you two... you compliment each other well me thinks  keep em coming... pretty soon you will have enough for a greatest hits LOL later-duet-gators jm |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Lone Wolf, My dear, I do have to agree -- you two do compliment each other. I love this. It is a very special thing for me to have two of my favorite poets writing such beautiful work - together!!! Love YA~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
First I must thank Jenn for taking the time to lend her talent to this piece. I really enjoy the process of collaberating with her. Jenn, My friend we must keep doing this. It was fun as always Jamie, YES, you got the point Nobody knows where they'll be or what they'll do until they find true love Sven, It'll be a cold day in errr....well let's just say if I personally ever get as good as all of you I could die a happy man Janet, thanks Psst...the check is in the mail  LOLTerry, My friend, you have just gained a friend for life Thank you for the compliment |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Thanks you for asking me to write again with you. I do enjoy the collaboration and it is always fun!!! Yes, we must keep doing this. Thanks to all who replied. Jeffrey and I appreciate the support we get from our fellow poets. Jan, Jeff pays you too??? LOL Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is a great poem you 2! Surprised there aren't more replies to it. So back to the top it goes  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Gotta tell ya...love found me here among these and many other beautiful words...and you better believe I am rejoicing...thanks |
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