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Your Pen Names in My Poem (cool idea spitfire..here is my offering)
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Your Pen Names in My Poem (cool idea spitfire..here is my offering) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Sometimes I get so mad I just could SpitFire Butterflies_don’t_cry said the awful liar I saw a Lone Wolf whiz on an Irish Rose And that poor butterfly, she took it on the nose Some Dark Angel, a real CrazyChick She was an X Angel her sadness seeming thick She bestowed with serenity a lovely WhtDove That let out a Little Cookie hitting me from above If I had a redheart, angrybraids would never fall I’d be a Dusk Treader a Lost Dreamer after all I’d walk the Severn barefoot and on the shore Under the sweet Sunshine I’d ask for nothing more Instead a watchful eye for the Meadowmuse With a bottle of whiskey I too often will abuse She says the Cheshire kitty’s just an Alicat I lay ‘for the Moonshine to ever think on that Lonely boy plays Pepper against the baseball fence Thinkin bout his RainbowGirl he’s loved ever since He wants to be a Balladeer so he swings harder then The fence crashes down! What JOY, 14 to be again Of course saying fourteen, that bsquirrel years Nan nan boo boo if you are a squirrel my dear (wish i coulda got everyone in i do i do) [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am grinning like crazy through my aching tooth...walt, you are a genius...gawd, how I love your mind...Lol and much applause...take a bow, now... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Walt!!! This is fantastic!!!! WOW, so clever lol Love your humour  yep thats me a real crazy chic  Thanks for including me in this masterpiece Walt. Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
And I didn't even tell you the Severn is a river... ~grinning~... Mightily done Walty my friend... hugs K |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Great Walt Thanks for the delight Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Fun read Walt ... that was a mouthful! Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Gotta love it ! Way to go , oh whacky one ! Doc |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...hehe.. Good thing I like squirrels - and that I Ain' Miss Behavin'...  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
ON THE NOSE!!!  geeze Walt........yuh beeeeeeeeg mean one!! cool idea ya big lug! |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ this is really fun to read, I like how you did this. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Little cookies, leave BIG splats! ROFL!! Walt this is excellent! I loved it, and got a great smile and laugh from it! You are one of a kind buddy, one of a kind  |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
hehehe aww shucks Walt *wink*  what fun! ~H |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love this...it's great! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Walt, would your last name be Disney, by any chance???? You are definitely looney tunes and I love every words of it!!! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
love this, wow, what a creative mind you have rofg |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
WOW...GREAT! Thanks {~,^} Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. |
Nobody wuvs me ( but I liked it anyway... wonderful job of working everyones name in and making sense.. something I couldn't do. "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Yo Walt ! I hope you don't mind me adding my two cents worth . After all you do tend to inspire many of us . I have seen with Eyes Plus 2 What Wayout Walt with words can do Though Mystic Man he may not be His words evoke hilarity "b squirrel years" indeed you know it they all agreed with Not A Poet H.Arlequins's big Cheshire Grin Infected Jeffery Carter Marge Tindal smiled all the while at all the funny parts , her flowing verse , though none the worse spread to the Justin Clan From there there was no stopping it could this be Wayout's plan ? Meadowmuse was so infused with humor that her tears Reached all the way up to the top and baffled Balladeer "What's all this ruckus in the forums" he asked with erudite decorum And not surprised at all was he when Wayout Walt said "Oops, just me!" |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Walt,...haha, love this!!! You have done well. So damn well. hehe. Thanks for your offering and the use of your other title in my poem. As soon as I saw this in the topic list I knew it would be good. Cool read. *Peace. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Too cute!!  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Walt . . . You saw me WHIZ on Irish Rose???!!!??? WHAT???? That is awful.....I feel I must apologize to my friend Irish Rose, I am so sorry!!!! ROLFMAO....this was great Walt!!! Wonderful idea. Lone Wolf Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
that was pretty sweet of you doc i feel twerp special inside thank ya'll for the kind replies yuh and thanx to spitfire for the coolest idea yuh yuh yhu |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Nice poem, it was very funny and clever, I enjoyed reading it and read enviously wishing I could write so well . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
funny funny Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You da man, you da man, Walt! Corinne |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
LOL....this is great, Walt!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Walt Whimsy...I loved it! (and Doc's inspired postlude, most delightful!) ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
After reading your many replys I had to go abck and read the poem again!!! LOL....very nicely done..... Julie :) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Hi Walt no problem about not getting everyones name in, after all you would not get much word play with a name like "brian madden" boring isn't it? lol well great poem, really cool. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 07-01-2000).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Walt, Enjoyed your poem much. I appreciate you trying to force my name into rhyming shape. It sorta worked. J/kMike P.S. I got a new version of icq, so if you still have my number, feel free to ask for authorization again. I'll post the icq thing again before long -- I just need to recover from this holiday first a little. Mike (see what I mean? ) |
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