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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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i find it hard to concentrate when you enter the room your gorgeous smile your scandanavian good looks ones i used to crush over in my picture books did you catch my eye? I am not so sure that I want you too could you be my cure? I wouldn't ask for much I just want to have fun someone to hang out with laughing in the sun maybe you could be my lover or even "just" a friend maybe in eachother we would never see the end mustering my courage I will ask you out memorizing all the things we could talk about I'd take you to a place I love in the mountain range soaking in the hot springs hiking through the trails getting lost in time getting lost in eachother will I ever find you?? are you right before my eyes?? will I ever dare to uncover my disguise? will I let you wrap me tightly in your arms? will I let you kiss me? will it taste sweetly on my lips? will i lay down and let you softly touch my skin?? i want to know when I find you will i let you in? Julie  [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Many questions you are asking, I can simpathise with that, we all have a lot to ask, I am sure you'll find him, and when you do you'll just go with the flow, I loved the poem, it was trully beutiful and very intense in it's deepness . I feel this poem goes much deeper than just what I am reading, If you are making a lot of dessisions at the moment, i hope they all go well and you find the right guy and go to that spot where you can be happy and share it's and your beuty with him . Thanks for the great read, I enjoyed it . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Before you ask the answer is yes!, oh yes,yes,yes!!! ahh..hmm.  Got carried away there. This is a wonderful poem, filled with alot of questions that never seem to have an answer until the time comes. I loved this one |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Back to the top.. HUSG |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you rainbow girl...... Julie :) |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
very well done! the way it is written would lead one (perhaps even yourself) to believe that you are asking the questions of another. but the only one who can answer them is you. that's very cool style. i dig it a lot. *picture mystic smoke billowing from the screen and the wizard of Oz voice speaking now* the answers lie within. =) hehe. good luck. We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great writing, Julie. When the time is right, you will find him. LW Poetry should surprise by a fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts, and appear almost a remembrance. --Jo |
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