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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia 
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I can hear your keys open the door, I want to walk upstairs, And see you once more. But I know that's not good, But somethings telling me I should. I want one more chance to hold you near, Hear sweet whispers in my ear. I want a chance to hear your voice, Know deep inside that i made the right choice. I want a chance to hold you tight, Know that theres not a chance we will fight. I know these things shouldnt be said, But thats not what its saying in my head. I dont know if what Im feeling is true, But I know life isnt going to be the same without you. There is really alot Im going to miss, I'd kill for one last kiss. Please think of me in due time, I'll always think of the past And when you were mine. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
that is so sad and remorseful well written Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW...so deeply sad very well written Beth Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
These words put a tear in my eye.......... "I'll always think of the past, and when you were mine......" You can tell when poetry is excellent.... because then you take it into your own heart and it fits! Hold life with an open hand....leaving it room to grow.... |
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michelax Junior Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 16Malta |
Beth, the way you express yourself is truly warm and real. I like it very much. - Michelax |
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