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julietrose
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0 posted 2000-07-04 12:22 PM


"Those" Feelings

When you've fallen asleep
When you've never awakened
When you've gone out to win
When you've come back from losing
...Do you still have "those" feelings?
When you have been loved
When you have gone out to love
When you have been hated
When you have tried to hate
...Do you still have "those" feelings?
When you have been hurt
When you have been healed
When you've fallen down
When you've gotten back up
...Do you still have "those" feelings?

Did you really ever have "those" feelings...?



~love, JulietRose
-If I was Peter Pan, you"d be my happy thought.-
"See, how she leans her cheek upon her hand!
O that I were a glove upon that ha

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Jamie
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1 posted 2000-07-04 12:24 PM


those feeling of trying again???
jamie

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with you
2 posted 2000-07-04 12:26 PM


JulietRose~ I think you'll find that everyone here can relate to this........I know I can. Great poem!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



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