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Paula Finn
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missouri

0 posted 2000-07-03 11:01 PM


"...and she whispered..."
"Do you have any idea that you hurt me"
"The journey"on this
"Trail of tears"leads me to
"The ache of again"
"The Truth of the Matter" is
"I See You I Feel You Near Me"
"Wherever The River Flows" so
"If Tomorrow Doesnt Come" please know
"I Gave It All'
"And Beyond" the
"Midnight Hour" we will be
"Forever As One"



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Honeybee
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1 posted 2000-07-03 11:36 PM



Well done!  Beautiful poem  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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Jamie
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2 posted 2000-07-03 11:37 PM


I don't know if you are a master quilter or if you just got lucky with the titles, but that is great work!!
jamie

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with you
3 posted 2000-07-04 12:15 PM


Paula~ Great one! Very smooth and flowing (and gotta love mine was first- COOL! )   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



Paula Finn
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missouri
4 posted 2000-07-04 12:36 PM


Melissa...this was fun

Jamie...hey guy when you have good material its easy

Sea....your title inspired the rest.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-07-04 01:47 AM


So, are you as good at piecing together a heart as you are with titles?  If so I'll send you mine.  Great read and wonderful flow.  Thanks for including mine in this.
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