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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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0 posted 2000-07-03 10:16 PM



From cortex chambers ventriloquists speak
with their conjured voices of thought in
the soul's quiet palace.
They confirm necessities. Amen -
and forgiveness, they repair despair,
teaching lessons from straw to sticks to bricks.

Yet, what sad reality; the acceptance of
the mediating value of lies,
when the truth was never better.
Who are they that disguise? body and mind,
until they're forced into the open
exposing such glib pretentious care.

Still, all the voices in the palace;
ventriloquists of inner thought;
remain quantum reminders,
that from the heart, to the great light that fills the sky,
all accept the gift of consciousness - and in the end,
it comes down to the truth of the matter.

Celtrue2000@E3B1G9

© Copyright 2000 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Daniel_vv
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since 2000-06-28
Posts 61

1 posted 2000-07-03 11:58 PM


An intresting poem.... I really liked this poem.
SEA
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2 posted 2000-07-04 12:36 PM


Ethome~ you have some really great thoughts here, I enjoyed this.   -SEA

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-07-04 01:40 AM


Still, all the voices in the palace;
ventriloquists of inner thought;
remain quantum reminders,
that from the heart, to the great light that fills the sky,
all accept the gift of consciousness - and in the end,
it comes down to the truth of the matter.
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and thats the "heart of the matter"...

very cool poem ethome,
cryptic and wisdom laced...
unique vocabulary choices...
made for a very captivating read
enjoyed much
take care
jm



What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


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