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-Let Me- Co-writer:Jeffrey Carter
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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I would just like to say a HUGE THANK YOU to Jeffrey for this one! He was sweet enough to try this with me and he is amazing at this I must confess. He just flows with such grace and ease...very impressive. < !signature--> -Let Me- i'm ready to fall again..let me i'm ready to feel my heart mend...let me i'm ready to take that leap...let me i'm ready to get that deep...let me i've loved your memory for far too long in another's arms never felt like i belonged i think i've found true love once again so just let me bring this torment to an end give me a chance to live life anew to love without carrying this burden of you allow my heart to radiate again the chance to again see the rainbows end please release me from this burden i bare give me the chance to show my new love i care allow me to inhale my new love into my being without your memory talking me into fleeing i'll always love you..but this i must pursue it's time i moved on to love without you so give me this chance to let this love be i'm ready to fall again...let me By: Jeffrey & Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne [This message has been edited by Holly (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
A very beautiful poem, and it flowed nicely, noticed one word where "I'm loved your memory...,I've loved your memory would've been stronger, otherwise it was quite a nice piece and one which I could definately relate to. Thank you. |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Gemini- Thanks..I noticed the typo as soon as I hit it. So I had to go back and edit it..I guess I wasn't fast enough..LOL. Thanks for the sweet words.  love & all, -Holly |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
wonderfully romantic! Corinne |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Holly & Jeffrey... You know, Holly, I told you I really loved this poem when I read it the other day... My favorite part has to be: give me a chance to live life anew to love without carrying this burden of you allow my heart to radiate again the chance to again see the rainbows end Jeffrey... I'm glad I've had a chance to read some of your work! Very impressive indeed,as Holly stated earlier... Keep up the great work guys! luv, Cyndey "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Great Work Holly and Jeff. Wonderful piece. Very nicely done. A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
First and foremost I want to thank Holly for allowing me the chance to write with her. She has such an amazing talent Gemini, Thank you, I think we could all relate to this in some way Holly, Thanks for taking time to write with me and for your patience and understanding Corrine, Thank you Cyndey, Thank you and that is my favorite part as well MysticalNights, Thank you |
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