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leteddybear
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since 2000-07-03
Posts 2


0 posted 2000-07-03 11:19 AM


Todays the day,
when you told me the truth,
and yet I feel so blue,
For the last week I have listened,
and bided my time,
so that I may talk to you.

You confronted me at last,
You've opened your heart,
spoke out for what you believe true,
and now I do not know what to do,
where to go,
for I feel for you.

Yet my friends in my hour of need,
have deserted me,
and left me behind,
so what I say to you,
is go for it with heart and soul,
for if you don't you'll regret it.
so go for it my friends and live your life.

© Copyright 2000 leteddybear - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-07-03 04:10 PM


Welcome to Passions leteddybear!  Cute name by the way, and a wonderful first post.  Living your life by being true to your heart ... nothing could be better! Lovely poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-07-03 04:25 PM


Ahh... the way life is to be lived.  Great start at Passions.  Welcome and keep writing please.
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