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Open Poetry #8

his thoughts

jennie may*
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

0 posted 2000-07-01 07:44 PM

four in the morning
whispers to me

it is dark
where you are

your head
full of tangled dreams

of me?

I still love you

I hope you
do
think of my
broken angel wings
sometimes

I hope that in
quiet moments
I surface
from the
dark waters of your
soul

I hope that you
miss me

just a little

sometimes

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-07-02 10:56 AM

Jennie May.......such longing such need..so very beautiful

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

2 posted 2000-07-02 11:29 AM

Very beautiful, Jennie may.
I can feel the yearning in this one so strongly.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2000-07-02 11:42 AM

A poignant expression of yearning. Very well done!

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

4 posted 2000-07-02 11:45 AM

Nicely done. Enjoyed your poem.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-07-02 12:19 PM

JennieMay~
Enjoyed this lovely render.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

6 posted 2000-07-03 04:31 PM

Sounds like your thoughts surface a whole lot... Good luck to you in getting over your pain. Thoughts of past loves can always haunt the soul...

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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