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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
four in the morning whispers to me it is dark where you are your head full of tangled dreams of me? I still love you I hope you do think of my broken angel wings sometimes I hope that in quiet moments I surface from the dark waters of your soul I hope that you miss me just a little sometimes |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jennie May.......such longing such need..so very beautiful |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Very beautiful, Jennie may. I can feel the yearning in this one so strongly. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A poignant expression of yearning. Very well done! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done. Enjoyed your poem. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JennieMay~ Enjoyed this lovely render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Sounds like your thoughts surface a whole lot... Good luck to you in getting over your pain. Thoughts of past loves can always haunt the soul... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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