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......and she whispered.......
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......and she whispered....... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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........and she whispered............... touch me gently sing me to sleep it is my heart that you keep .........and she sighed............ feeling every word listening to the song touching her gently drifting along .........and she dreamt.......... of a man singing to her from deep in the night till dawn and beside the bed the tape played on................. -SEA- Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
she whispers.....simply beautiful Sea, beautiful |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
mmmmmm, this makes me want to dream....very nice ....love the dreamy sleepy quality to the form... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ thank you so much  Corazon~ thanks! -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely SEA ... mystical and oh so dreamy! Love the format, it worked really nicely with your sentiments! Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kit~ you are always so kind, thanks for reading and liking -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sea-girl I LOVE this one... love the creative presentation i love going to sleep to music playing too. great poem...great writing later-sea-song-gator jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Quite enchantingly beautiful... regards, sudhir |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ thank you, this came to me last night before bed and after listening to Prince~ Do Me Baby~ if you haven't heard that one you need to, hot hot hot!!!!  Sudhir lyer~ thank you for always responding so nice -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What inspiration you find in music. Loved the format and the vision left inside as I read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely inspiration Sea...what were you listening to? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ Thank you, I love music, my favorite of all is Prince, he inspires me in all ways possible Martie~ I was listening to Prince, he is amazing..... -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Yep, can remember turning the volume up....hope it wasn't the same tape we were listening to...LOL HUGS |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Oh, so pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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julietrose New Member
since 2000-06-30
Posts 9pennsylvania... |
well whySEA, I loved it, awesome work. It was really good. ~love, JulietRose |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
.....and she sighed...... Beautiful Sea!! When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I love how you've put this together. A whisper, and a sigh...and spectacular! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RG~ always turn it down low when going to bed..HEEHEE~ HUGS right back to you Marge~ thank you JulietRose~ thanks Marilyn~ thank you very much WhtDove~ thank you for the praise, makes me feel good! -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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