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SEA
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0 posted 2000-07-03 09:36 AM



........and she whispered...............

touch me gently
sing me to sleep
it is my heart
that you keep


.........and she sighed............


feeling every word
listening to the song
touching her gently
drifting along


.........and she dreamt..........


of a man singing to her
from deep in the night till dawn
and beside the bed
the tape played on.................

-SEA-

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-07-03 09:46 AM


she whispers.....simply beautiful Sea, beautiful
Corazon
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2 posted 2000-07-03 09:48 AM


mmmmmm, this makes me want to dream....very nice ....love the dreamy sleepy quality to the form...
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3 posted 2000-07-03 10:03 AM


Paula~ thank you so much  

Corazon~ thanks!  

-SEA

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Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-07-03 10:57 AM


Lovely SEA ... mystical and oh so dreamy! Love the format, it worked really nicely with your sentiments! Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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Kit~ you are always so kind, thanks for reading and liking   -SEA

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Janet Marie
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6 posted 2000-07-03 01:28 PM


sea-girl
I LOVE this one...
love the creative presentation
i love going to sleep to music playing too.
great poem...great writing
later-sea-song-gator
jm


What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
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~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2000-07-03 01:29 PM


Quite enchantingly beautiful...

regards, sudhir

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Janet~ thank you, this came to me last night before bed and after listening to Prince~ Do Me Baby~ if you haven't heard that one you need to, hot hot hot!!!!  

Sudhir lyer~ thank you for always responding so nice  

-SEA

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Mark Bohannan
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9 posted 2000-07-03 02:35 PM


What inspiration you find in music.  Loved the format and the vision left inside as I read.
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10 posted 2000-07-03 02:38 PM


Lovely inspiration Sea...what were you listening to?  
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Mark~ Thank you, I love music, my favorite of all is Prince, he inspires me in all ways possible  

Martie~ I was listening to Prince, he is amazing.....  

-SEA

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RainbowGirl
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12 posted 2000-07-03 05:45 PM


Yep, can remember turning the volume up....hope it wasn't the same tape we were listening to...LOL

HUGS

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13 posted 2000-07-03 08:47 PM


SEA~
Oh, so pretty.
~*Marge*~


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julietrose
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14 posted 2000-07-03 09:59 PM


well whySEA,
  I loved it, awesome work.  It was really good. ~love, JulietRose

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15 posted 2000-07-03 10:08 PM


.....and she sighed......

Beautiful Sea!!  



When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep;

How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face...

William Butler Yeats

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16 posted 2000-07-03 10:20 PM


I love how you've put this together. A whisper, and a sigh...and spectacular!
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17 posted 2000-07-03 10:33 PM


RG~ always turn it down low when going to bed..HEEHEE~ HUGS right back to you  

Marge~ thank you  

JulietRose~ thanks  

Marilyn~ thank you very much  

WhtDove~ thank you for the praise, makes me feel good!  

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



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