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jennie may*
Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122


0 posted 2000-07-03 11:18 PM


I am alone


something I have
gotten
used to

unless it's a night
like this

I fight to not love you

I turn the
compass in
my heart
away from you
time after time

I look away
and look away

sea sick from
the waves
of tears
and laughter
and tears
again

tired muscles
from
running from
the sound of your
voice

your brown eyes
are a
battle
I can almost
always win

almost...


but tonight


I simply miss you


that's all

© Copyright 2000 jennie may* - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-07-03 11:22 PM


Jennie....aaaaawwwww girl....just know the pain will go away and you will love again...bigger brighter...and with one more worthy of your love
Jamie
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-07-03 11:31 PM


Jenny,
    
   I wish there were magical words that could give comfort and appease the longing that loneliness breeds. I can tell you this,, writing helps. It really does.
And with words as beautiful as these you are on your way.
jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



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