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Perchance To Dance |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Perchance To Dance ~*Marge Tindal*~ A dance perchance to catch a glance of the evening skies Held in the wonder of your arms gazing into your eyes I gather you close to me with song sung serenade The melody begins my heart you've played Held in tender caress your body close to mine No need for stars in the sky for our hearts to entwine Take this love I offer you hold me through the night I will be here for you when dawn finds it's light Through the meadow we will scamper like butterflies at play Take my heart, filled with song let's love the day away When evening shadows again come into play Singing songs of serenade we'll dance across the star-filled Milky Way ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Marge, this is beautiful, I loved it!  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love this!!!! Really wonderful piece of poetry, the imagery is fantastic! ---------------------- Through the meadow we will scamper like butterflies at play Take my heart, filled with song let's love the day away ------------------------- This really took my breath away....what a beautiful picture you paint with your words. You are an artist with words, Marge! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Marge You've again struck a chord between dream and reality...a dance across the milkyway..a tender lover you're....good imagination shown throughout. Sincerely A_L |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Thanks, sweetie ! Lil' Lizzie~ I'm glad you like it, hun. It was one of those 'sing-songy' ones that just wanted to be written. AmazonLover~ Thank you for your kindness. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Through the meadow we will scamper like butterflies at play Take my heart, filled with song let's love the day away When evening shadows again come into play Singing songs of serenade we'll dance across the star-filled Milky Way aw Marge that was beautiful and mnagical as always. Even think about giving dance lessons I love to dance like that. wonderful poem ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
I got tears in my eyes...dont know if it is the poem or if it is me...but i thought it was beautiful.... -Nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, this is beautiful. I loved the imagery. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~You take the words right out of my mouth. Impressed once again. Thank you dear. *Peace. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Now that's dancing! Very good, Marge! Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I'll have to let the words of an old JM song echo my sentiments on this one.... I won't dance - Don't ask me I won't dance - Don't ask me I won't dance Madam, with you. My heart won't let my feet Do what they should do. You're so thrilling Oh, so thrilling And, oh, what you do to me.. I'm like an ocean wave That's tossed on the shore. I get so absolutely stumped on the floor. When you dance You're charming and you're gentle 'Specially when you do the Continental But this feeling isn't purely mental 'Cause - heaven rest us - I'm not asbestos So..... I won't dance - Don't ask me I won't dance - Don't ask me I won't dance - Merci Boquet. I know that music is the way to romance But, when I hold you in my arms, I won't dance.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brian~ Thanks for the lovely comments. I did teach roller-dance for years. Nothing like waltzing across the dance floor of your heart.  Nando~ Awwwwww ! I hope it was the poem ... dancing with your heart ! Eloise~ Thank you, hon. SpitFire~ Well, go ahead and sing it while you're dancing. Denise~ Just a little fancy 'two-stepping'! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Balladeer~ You caught me *sighing* .... 'I know that music is the way to romance But, when I hold you in my arms, I won't dance.' GREAT BIG SMILES ! ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Marge,...I said that all wrong.  . What I was Trrryyyying to say was that you and your work leave me speachless. But, just to let you know,..your poems DO make me sing and dance with delight. You know I love all you do. Take care,...and please excuse this sleep deprived and weary head of mine.  . *Peace. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh Marge you always make your words dance it's fitting to write a poem in regards to it Thank you for sharing this...I'm off to dance you gave me the urge to do the "Butterfly"!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ *giggling* here ... Thanks, love. ButterfliesDC~ I like the very idea of a dance called 'the butterfly' ! Thanks, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sweet and melodic Marge ... danced it's way right into my heart it did! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Thanks, gal. I'm so glad you liked this little 'dance'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW Marge this flowed really well just like a moonlit dance across the dance floor. wonderful read Marge, very visual. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thanks, sweet gal. So nice to share this early morning with you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
The idyllic Tindal! Very nice and very romantic! Deepak |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Deepak~ So nice to see you again. Enjoy your stroll through this talented bunch. Glad to share with you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You have me dancing now!, and believe me that takes some doing God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge This one is soooo sweet Got me thinking about doing a lil 'foxtrot' <3 Coco <3 |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, you are the queen of love, romance, and passion, and every poem is different. This is lovely Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Alright ! Let's all dance ! CocoBaci~ Yes !! All out on the dance floor ! LizzieGal~ Get on your dancing shoes ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ This was wonderful!! Flowed so smoothly just like a dance. Loved it!! LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Come on, gal ! We're all on the dance floor kicking up our heels ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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