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Taken By Surprise
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Taken By Surprise ~*Marge Tindal*~ You take me by surprise caress me with your eyes The things you do to me are so very new to me You've taken skies of gray turned them to shades of blue How much I love the surprising things you do You take me by surprise Leaving me trying to explain the feeling I get when you whisper my name You've turned my world around with such a melodic sound I'm enchanted when your eyes simply say in soft surprise 'I love you' ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
It didn't surprise me that it would be another great poem!  Loved the last stanza. The eyes do tell so much, don't they. |
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babyblue Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 12 |
I am very happy you have found a love so deep.If onlf i could.. The only hope I have is the hope I've lost. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Ahhh, what a lovely poem. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Marge, what a way for me to end my stay here tonite before getting myself some sleep but to put my heart and mind at ease and read such a pretty verse inked by thee! Coco |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge I love this I think the eyes tell us alot about a person and you can most certainly see the depth of a soul through someones eyes.Lovely Marge Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
caress me with your eyes oh what a feeling!!! another jewel from you Marge... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, this is wonderful! I'm glad you've found someone who makes you feel this way. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ I'm delighted that you like it. Yes, the eyes tell it so beautifully. BabyBlue~ Thank you. Time will give you many loves. KitKat~ Thanks, hon. CocoBaci~ I'm glad that you had these thoughts to tuck you in for the slumber. Tracie~ Yes, depth and truth are evident by the looks we give and receive. Sudhir~ My, friend .. I so much appreciate your comments on what I write. LoveBug~ Oh, hon .... me too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Can't wait till my life gets here and I can write of this feeling.....great work!!!  Julie :) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is beautiful!!! I am so happy for you Oh...if only I could get to feel that way someday!!! Love ya!!! Love and hugs, Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Gal, your poetry is a treasure to behold. I can almost feel tht caress...sigh. Great writing my friend. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JulieAnn~ I would wish for you that it happens. Lil' Lizzie~ Love, you will feel it in your life ... and I hope that when you do ... you will recall that I told you so ... and smile in remembering. LoneWolf~ What a sweetheart of a reply. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marge this is very gentle and romantic...like it a lot...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ I am so pleased that it touches you gently. Appreciate you letting me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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LittleCookie Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 55asheville,NC,UnitedStates |
It's so great that you always find "new" in your love some forget to find new and special things they like about their loved ones!Great again! :*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Lovely simple direct |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'd love to take you by surprise Sneak up there behind your eyes Put my hands around your waist Lick your neck and have a taste. I'd see your eyes pop open wide And feel your skin turn petrified Feel the goosebumps on your arms As you surrendered to my charms. I'd blow sweet nothings in your hair You may resist....I wouldn't care. Then, as I had my way with you, I'd smile and scream out "Peek-a-boo!" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cookie~ Thank you ... yes, it's wonderful. Paula~ My thanks to you. All the promises that you make Would cause a woman to shiver and quake I'd not resist a little of you so come on ... I wanna play  'Peek-A-Boo'! Love ya' to pieces ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I'm enchanted when your eyes simply say in soft surprise 'I love you'" Oh what a wonderful ending to this softly romantic verse Marge! Made me give a little audible sigh at the end this did! Beautifully penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Such lovely work, as always. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Another good'un Marge LOL @ playing peek-a-boo with Balldeer Have you seen his pic? Boo sounds about right to me  LOLAll my love, Jeffrey |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, I am wounded!!! Jeffrey!!!! You really know how to hurt a guy, yanno??? You been hanging out with Parker way too much!!  : |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ I could almost hear your *sigh* Thank you. EagleOne~ Thanks so very much. Oh,Jeffrey~ I've seen Balladeer's adorable picture I think that he is OH SO FINE ! And if he wasn't spoken for I'd surely make him mine ! Balladeer~ Don't you fret, sweetie ... You know who you're pleasing ! ME ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Oh Marge, This is just so beautiful and romantic. *sigh* Isn't being in love the most wonderful feeling in the world? *sigh* kat |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kat~ Yeah ..... sure 'nuff ! Thanks for the deep *sighs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kat~ Yeah ..... sure 'nuff ! Thanks for the deep *sighs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ BEAUTIFUL!! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thank ya' doll ! *Notice the double-post to Kat .. this site took a 5 minute *burp* ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
always "taken by surprise" by your poetry...a beauty as always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Thank you so kindly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
it should come as no surprise to find someone loves you, Marge. You're always upbeat and insprirational! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Well ..... not always - but I try. Thanks, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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