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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-06-26 02:12 AM




Taken By Surprise
~*Marge Tindal*~

You take me by surprise
caress me with your eyes
The things you do to me
are so very new to me

You've taken skies of gray
turned them to shades of blue
How much I love
the surprising things you do

You take me by surprise
Leaving me trying to explain
the feeling I get
when you whisper my name

You've turned my world around
with such a melodic sound
I'm enchanted when your eyes
simply say in soft surprise
'I love you'





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Eloise
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1 posted 2000-06-26 02:25 AM


It didn't surprise me that it would be another great poem!    Loved the last stanza.  The eyes do tell so much, don't they.
babyblue
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2 posted 2000-06-26 02:30 AM


I am very happy you have found a love so deep.If onlf i could..

The only hope I have is the hope I've lost.

kitkat
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3 posted 2000-06-26 03:59 AM


Ahhh, what a lovely poem.
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4 posted 2000-06-26 04:11 AM


Oh Marge, what a way for me to end my stay here tonite before getting myself some sleep but to put my heart and mind at ease and read such a pretty verse inked by thee!

Coco  

tracie66
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5 posted 2000-06-26 04:24 AM


Marge I love this   I think the eyes tell us alot about a person and you can most certainly see the depth of a soul through someones eyes.
Lovely Marge
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 2000-06-26 01:02 PM


caress me with your eyes


oh what a feeling!!!

another jewel from you Marge...

regards,
sudhir

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne

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7 posted 2000-06-26 01:35 PM


Marge, this is wonderful! I'm glad you've found someone who makes you feel this way.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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8 posted 2000-06-26 03:09 PM


Eloise~
I'm delighted that you like it.
Yes, the eyes tell it so beautifully.

BabyBlue~
Thank you.  
Time will give you many loves.

KitKat~
Thanks, hon.  

CocoBaci~
I'm glad that you had these thoughts to tuck you in for the slumber.

Tracie~
Yes, depth and truth are evident by the looks we give and receive.

Sudhir~
My, friend ..
I so much appreciate your comments on what I write.

LoveBug~
Oh, hon .... me too !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JulieAnn
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9 posted 2000-06-26 04:30 PM


Can't wait till my life gets here and I can write of this feeling.....great work!!!  

Julie :)



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10 posted 2000-06-26 05:27 PM


This is beautiful!!! I am so happy for you
Oh...if only I could get to feel that way someday!!! Love ya!!!

Love and hugs,
Lil' Lizzie



"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Lone Wolf
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11 posted 2000-06-26 10:19 PM


Marge~

Gal, your poetry is a treasure to behold.  I can almost feel tht caress...sigh.  Great writing my friend.  

LW


Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith


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12 posted 2000-06-27 06:37 AM


JulieAnn~
I would wish for you that it happens.  

Lil' Lizzie~
Love, you will feel it in your life ...
and I hope that when you do ...
you will recall that I told you so ...
and smile in remembering.

LoneWolf~
What a sweetheart of a reply.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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13 posted 2000-06-27 06:40 AM


Marge this is very gentle and romantic...like it a lot...James
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14 posted 2000-06-27 08:08 AM


James~
I am so pleased that it touches you gently.
Appreciate you letting me know.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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15 posted 2000-06-30 12:30 PM


It's so great that you always find "new" in your love some forget to find new and special things they like about their loved ones!Great again!

:*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul

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16 posted 2000-06-30 01:02 AM


Lovely simple direct
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17 posted 2000-06-30 01:05 AM


I'd love to take you by surprise
Sneak up there behind your eyes
Put my hands around your waist
Lick your neck and have a taste.

I'd see your eyes pop open wide
And feel your skin turn petrified
Feel the goosebumps on your arms
As you surrendered to my charms.

I'd blow sweet nothings in your hair
You may resist....I wouldn't care.
Then, as I had my way with you,
I'd smile and scream out "Peek-a-boo!"

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18 posted 2000-06-30 06:59 AM


Cookie~
Thank you ... yes, it's wonderful.

Paula~
My thanks to you.

Balladeer~

All the promises
that you make
Would cause a woman
to shiver and quake

I'd not resist
a little of you
so come on ...
I wanna play
'Peek-A-Boo'!  

Love ya' to pieces !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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19 posted 2000-06-30 07:05 AM


"I'm enchanted when your eyes
simply say in soft surprise
'I love you'"

Oh what a wonderful ending to this softly
romantic verse Marge! Made me give a little
audible sigh at the end this did!
Beautifully penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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20 posted 2000-06-30 10:50 AM


Such lovely work, as always.  

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



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21 posted 2000-06-30 10:57 AM


Another good'un Marge

LOL @ playing peek-a-boo with Balldeer

Have you seen his pic? Boo sounds about right to me   LOL

All my love,
Jeffrey


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22 posted 2000-06-30 04:03 PM


Oh, I am wounded!!! Jeffrey!!!! You really know how to hurt a guy, yanno??? You been hanging out with Parker way too much!! :
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23 posted 2000-06-30 04:55 PM


Kit~
I could almost hear your *sigh*
Thank you.

EagleOne~
Thanks so very much.

Oh,Jeffrey~
I've seen Balladeer's adorable picture
I think that he is OH SO FINE !
And if he wasn't spoken for
I'd surely make him mine !

Balladeer~
Don't you fret, sweetie ...
You know who you're pleasing !
ME !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kat
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24 posted 2000-06-30 05:16 PM


Oh Marge, This is just so beautiful and romantic.  *sigh*  

Isn't being in love the most wonderful  feeling in the world?  *sigh*



kat

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Kat~
Yeah ..... sure 'nuff !
Thanks for the deep *sighs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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26 posted 2000-06-30 10:42 PM


Kat~
Yeah ..... sure 'nuff !
Thanks for the deep *sighs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge~ BEAUTIFUL!!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



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SEA~
Thank ya' doll !

*Notice the double-post to Kat ..
this site took a 5 minute *burp* !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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29 posted 2000-07-01 06:11 AM


always "taken by surprise" by your poetry...a beauty as always
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30 posted 2000-07-01 04:16 PM


Kaile~
Thank you so kindly.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Corinne
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31 posted 2000-07-01 07:26 PM


it should come as no surprise to find someone loves you, Marge.  You're always upbeat and insprirational!

Corinne

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32 posted 2000-07-02 12:48 PM


Corinne~
Well ..... not always -
but I try.
Thanks, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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