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Rodney Belcher
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since 2000-06-06
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Taylor, Michigan

0 posted 2000-07-03 12:41 PM



Looking into Your eyes, I feel and experience so much.
I see the girl I fell in love with, full of wonder and hope.
The feeling is so deep and pure; I want to lose myself
In the depths, forever embraced in the warmth, of Your eyes.

There are times when there is sadness in Your eyes.
I detest these times, because too often I am the cause.
I can see the hurt, your very soul coming through,
And that pain forms a lonely tear, in Your eyes.

In a loving embrace, Your eyes let me feel you.
I am inside you, feeling you feeling me and for that moment
we become one, inseparable and whole. These moments let
me know a different, sensual part of you, through Your eyes.

Sometimes, Your eyes are full of laughter and the joy is contagious.
When Your eyes smile, there is no competition for the light which comes in rays and can be felt as well as seen. Your happiness is beautiful and better when shared and conveyed, with Your eyes.

Often it is said, that the eyes are the windows to the soul;
I know this to be true. If I should ever doubt the sincerity
Of the statement, all I have to do is look, into Your eyes.



Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

© Copyright 2000 Rodney Belcher - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
1 posted 2000-07-03 01:42 AM


What beautiful thoughts....looking through her eyes....
Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-07-03 02:33 AM


Look into my eyes,,, you will see, what you mean to me,,,,, --bryan adams, (everything i do)
very nice rodney

jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-07-03 04:04 AM


WOW..this is just a most beautiful and delightful piece..and you are so right the eyes are the windows to the soul..I most certainly agree  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


katherine
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since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Canberra Australia
4 posted 2000-07-03 04:57 AM


o loved your poem!!!
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-07-03 05:01 AM


This was absolutely lovely Rodney!  Sweetly romantic and full of wonderful heartfelt sentiments ... windows of the soul indeed ... you've described this perfectly! Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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