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What I want |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
What I want out of life… I want to love someone, with all my heart and feel the same amount of love in return. I want to have that person be my best friend and closet confidant. I want to grow old with her, but fight it together every step of the way. I want to be successful and to share that success with the person that means the most to me in the whole wide world. I want to hear a love song and have their image immediately pop into my mind. I want to have them enjoy me as much as I enjoy them. I want every time we make love to feel like the first time and every time we leave one another to be the last time. I want to lay in bed with her for hours and do nothing but talk. I want to have fun and play and act foolish, so that we can have fond memories as we age. I want to spend an eternity in her presence and have it feel but like a second. I want to grow and learn and laugh and cry with her. I want to face obstacles that seem impenetrable, so that when we do overcome them, we can celebrate our victory together. I want to worship her physically and emotionally and feel the love we share unspoken. I want her to respect me, so I can respect her, and all that I do in the name of our love, because everything accomplished by one of us will benefit the other. I want to never have to say “I’m sorry,” but never fail to say it to save some hurt. I want a life with her, but a life worth living, filled with love and accomplishment, even if what we accomplish is just loving one another. I want her life and my life to be intertwined and inseparable, out of mutual desire, not jealousy and pettiness. I want her to live for me and me for her. [This message has been edited by Rodney Belcher (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope you get all you want out of life...excellent sharing of your hearts desires...James |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I want a life with her, but a life worth living, filled with love and accomplishment, even if what we accomplish is just loving one another. " Exquisite line above Rodney ... took my breath away, it did. I hope that you get all you want ... Wonderful poem! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rodney~ this is beautiful and heartfelt.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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