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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-07-02 07:44 PM


The woman of my dreams

I want to be a millionaire...
that would be lots of fun
spending lazy summer days
with Julia Roberts tanning in the sun.
After a while we'd look like tanned up twins
richly deeply bronzed all over just like George Hamilton.
Mission impossible you might say...
I have some others that possibly could see the light of day.
If and when only heaven knows...
meanwhile back on earth
my needs and desires continue to grow.
I want a girlfriend that really is a friend to the end.
She would dig me totally and never could pretend
that I was in her thoughts and deeds
cause she would always be spending time with me
and thinking about me endlessly.
Of course I would feel exactly the same way
and call her every day
and think about her when she's gone
and dream of her til the dawn.
I hope she is a China doll...
silky skin and hair and all
and if she loves to talk and tan and hike
in many ways we would be just alike
and I'd Love to hike with her the rest of my life.
I hope my wants are not a foolish scheme...
Am I asking too much desiring the woman of my dreams?

Jameslee@July2,2000




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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2000-07-02 07:50 PM


James,

This is beautiful.  You are not asking for too much my friend.  No way.  You deserve to be loved in the way that you love.  Accept no less.  She is out there and you will find her.     Great writing!

LW


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2000-07-02 09:10 PM


James~ just when you least expect it, you will turn a corner and Wham! There she will be.....it'll happen, you just have to give fate a chance to bring you two together. Your poems are open, honest and very sweet as I'm sure you are.   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
3 posted 2000-07-02 10:01 PM


Oh my friend, when she finds you.......she will be a very lucky lady indeed.  After all, I KNOW I'm not the only one who thinks you are wonderful!!!!!  

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-07-02 10:42 PM


love ya when your in sweet dreams SBJ!!
wonderful sentiments and emotions James
as always...expressed with your tender heart.

"kiss the moon and touch the sky
hold fast to your dreams...never let them die...
for we wont find love unless we try"  

later-sweet-gator
jm

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-07-03 07:33 AM


Thank you Lone Wolf, Sea, Marina, and Janet for your kind words...glad you enjoyed this.
Marina I wish you lived close to me...I love you attitude...
Janet I am hoping that the woman of my dreams will soon step right into my face and kiss me hard...James

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2000-07-03 08:02 AM


Great poem James!    Ask, and you shall receive!  She'll come along soon enough ... and "she" will be a very lucky girl indeed!  Wonderful poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
7 posted 2000-07-03 11:47 AM


Well James, lucky for us we both have e-mail!!!  

Marina

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2000-07-03 12:41 PM


There is that woman out there who deserves
only that which you can offer.  Hold on and
be patient.  Hope that it happens for you soon.  Great sentiment.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2000-07-04 07:06 PM


Thank you Kit, Marina, and Mark I appreciate your wonderful remarks.
Oh Marina it is not the same...you can not look into an emails eyes, and touching an email does nothing for me, but feelings and thoughts and emotions expressed on these pages can be magical...almost like a dream...James

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
10 posted 2000-07-05 12:16 PM


No James it is not too much to ask!!  You deserve to find a beautiful woman who is kind and caring and sensitive just like you.
Two of similar spirt - two kindred hearts and souls.  Be patient.  
And I'll take this opportunity to thank you for regularly popping over to dark to read a post by myself, I appreciate it a lot, I myself hardly find the time to sneak over to open.  SO please know how much it is appreciated hon.  *hugs*

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
11 posted 2000-07-05 11:02 PM


Hi James,

What a wonderful poem, I so enjoy reading your work,

Love, Cerenity

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
12 posted 2000-07-06 05:27 PM


Thank you Isis for your friendship and encouragement.   I appreciate your warm and friendly spirit.
Thank you Cerenity for your wonderful comments and encouragement.
James

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
13 posted 2005-07-27 12:19 PM


Thank you...James
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