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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Chaos Chaos comes with the dawn, Bringing the light of morn. The stars and moon have gone to sleep With my fantasies to keep And I awake new born. Now chaos rules the day And I am torn away To fill the needs of all that live With the real of take and give To store the hay away. It's a tale of repeat And is a lonely street. A one on one, that must be done. This work beneath the sun, This work that gives receipt. But comes the time of rest, I do my very best, To sail the moon and stars again, To pick up dreams, amen And dream myself illusions guest. The night does close the door And chaos does withdraw, I sail upon my phantom ship, To anchor in a slip, Of valleys green and stars galore. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Great, Seymour!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great poem Seymour. "To sail the moon and stars again, to pick up dreams, amen and dream myself illusions guest." What a perfect way to describe the escape form the chaos of the day. Well done! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But comes the time of rest, I do my very best, To sail the moon and stars again, To pick up dreams, amen And dream myself illusions guest. The night does close the door And chaos does withdraw, I sail upon my phantom ship, To anchor in a slip, Of valleys green and stars galore. ------------------ i do so love your rhyme this poem is sublime  awesome Sy...awsome later perfect-rhyme-gator jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Poetry it is ! 'The night does close the door And chaos does withdraw, I sail upon my phantom ship, To anchor in a slip, Of valleys green and stars galore' Smiling and loving this day spent with such talent. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can relate to this very well! Well done, Sy!  Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
No wonder the stars and moon are so popular. They can fullfill our dreams , at least until dawn, Very beautiful poetry Liz |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Always liked this one, glad you submitted it and I'll vote for it. Corinne |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, allow me to give you my chaotic vote.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my wonderful friends that commented, thank you, thank you. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
like this one sy, so true, if we didn't have the nights to dream how could we face the days? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is simply fantastic! ****vote**** -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Fantastic indeed... -------- I sail upon my phantom ship, To anchor in a slip, Of valleys green and stars galore. -------- I have heard somewhere though that "In total chaos lies ultimate perfection", I sometimes wonder if that is true or not. regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great poem, Sy...a vote from me for the night and the chaos of the day...we need them both to make harmony like this poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corazon, True how could we face the day without the night. *L* Sea, Sudhir and Martie, Without your comments how could I write? |
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