Open Poetry #8 |
Love Trap |
kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Love Trap You're completely loaded with ammunition When you set out for your hunt And there’s nothing more rewarding to you When you bring back what you want You calculate your every move Hunting out your prey A strategic charmer with a plan You set your trap so she won’t stray Manipulative to the core You find your ways to keep her there No remorse or sympathy It’s all a game and you don’t care Playing on all her weaknesses You’re a master in your art She’ll be hypnotized before too long You’ll move right in to take her heart Unfamiliar and unaware Of the games you plan to play She’ll believe your every word And with you she’ll plan to stay Right then you’ll have her heart Her body and her soul You’ll take what you can take from her Then you’ll toss her in the cold But the day will come before too long When you will meet your match You’ll be the one to be reeled in And you’ll become the catch Caught off guard is what you’ll be You’ll give your total soul and heart To the one you want for life She’ll laugh and say It’s a game I do play I've been playing from the start [This message has been edited by kat (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Excellent work kat.. Love how you portrayed the old saying.. "What goes around comes around.." Great job! A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Fitting ending. Goose and Gander and all that.. Good Reading. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes this is the game of Love and you have expressed it so well...beware...don't fall in love all by yourself. James |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
MysticalNights: Thank-you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. Yes, what goes around always comes around sooner or later. Prometheus: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it James: Some people do play games and it's a shame that people get hurt because of it. No I don't ever plan on falling in love all by myself. Thanks kat |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hmm .. this poem makes one think Reflect on many of things One issue is for certain True love is never a game Yet in this world of passion and romance One risks it all and takes the plounge To discover their heart could be the rite one Coco PS: Kat, good writing here I like the expression you convey |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
great writings Kat....there is many a person like this men and woman I agree with MN "what goes around comes around" eventually This is good.. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great writing Kat! The hunter becomes the hunted ... loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Coco: I agree, true love is never a game and with love we take that chance that maybe just maybe we may just find the one who that is right for us. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Tracie: Yes, what goes around comes around. I agree also. Not with just love but with everything. At one point it comes around to a full circle. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Kit: Thanks! Glad you loved it! Yes, in this case the hunter does become the hunted. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Excellent, Kat!!! And oh so true! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Esp: Thank-you! I'm glad you enjoyed it kat |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Brilliant! I love the way you have put this. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
boy if this ain't the truth You left me, sweet, two legacies,- a legacy of love A Heavenly Father would content, Had He the offer of; Emily Dickinson |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kat, Oh yes, they will get theirs in the end. They always do. That is just plain mean to play with someone's emotions like that. I am seeing how you have worn all those "costumes" this week. I hope next week is better for you!! LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
EagleOne: I'm glad you loved it. Thanks! Irish Rose: Yes it is. It all comes back in the end. Thanks for posting Lone Wolf: Yes it is mean, but some people still do it. Thanks! I hope next week is better, I have a feeling it will be. kat |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is the Love Police and I have reason to believe that your heart is in danger. We would like to put your heart into Protective custody. You will now be known as Pickle Jar and here is a plane ticket to a tropickle island. Oops! Tropical island, where I insect will be your bodyguard. They say you should bring a minimum amount of your personal things. I suggest your apron and maybe some sun glasses! When we get there it's best if you make no contact with anyone except with myself. Oh! They say you can write on some place called Positions in the Pantry or Pain in Pleasure or I don't know something like that? Anyway we can…..I remember now!! Poetry in Passions! Anyway we can leave right now I'm ready!..I mean No time to waste we should leave immediately!! |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Insect: The Love Police?? Wow! You never told me that you were in the force. You may want to put my heart in protective custody but my name! Why change my name?? I mean Pickle Jar??? HUH?? LOL. The tropical island sounds great and to have my own personal bodyguard, Wow! My apron still has some chocolate on it from last time. Remember? As far as the sunglasses, no problem, but I think I'm going to have to bring more of my personal belongings with me because I've heard sometimes the nights at some of these tropical islands can get a little cold. LOL Thanks for thinking of me when it comes to my writing but, Positions in Pantry? Pain in Pleasure? Ok, so you finally remembered it’s Poetry in Passion but now I’m kind of wondering if it’s a tropical island that I’m going to or not. Leave immediately? You’re ready? What are you talking about? Where’s your uniform? Hmmmmm…I’ve got to think about this a little, after all I wouldn’t want to end up in a Love Trap, would I? Maybe for some company for you I can bring my friend Claudette? I remember how impressed you were on how big and strong she was. I’m sure she would keep you fit, after all you don’t want to spend so much time on a tropical island and come back all sluggish and all. What would the rest of the force think hmmmmm??? LOL Insect! Pickle Jar???? You crack me up!!!!! ROFLMAO! OK! WHEN IS THE PLANE LEAVING? Pickle Jar Oops!! I mean kat LOL |
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